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[فاطمة الزهراء]

و حتى اقل الاشخاص لهم اهميه

Sorry, but I have Q

Here Arthur said

We can't all strike very big blows, and even the little ones count for something

ones here doesn't replace blows to avoid the repitition?

if that so I think we can translate it like this:

لا يمكننا جميعًا تحقيق الإنجازات الكبيرة، وحتى الصغيرة منها لها أهمية.

Hmm, I'm not sure

في أمان الله

[فاطمة الزهراء]

OH, I completely forgot about translation the other sentence:

I know that I know nothing

أعلم بأني لا أعرف شيئًا.

Hmm, I really longed to see your opinions about my suggestion, but seems isn't interesting

Anyway, here you are the sentence:

The Firefighters will be dispatched soon to put out the buildings' fire.

Good luck

وفي أمان الله

[Harry Potter]

ones here doesn't replace blows to avoid the repitition?

if that so I think we can translate it like this:

لا يمكننا جميعًا تحقيق الإنجازات الكبيرة، وحتى الصغيرة منها لها أهمية.

Hmm, I'm not sure

Yeah, this makes sense ,actually when I think more about them , I find both of them right, so I really don't know what is it supposed to mean

The Firefighters will be dispatched soon to put out the buildings' fire

.

سيصل رجال الاطفاء قريباً لاخماد الحريق بالمبنى

Hmm, I really longed to see your opinions about my suggestion, but seems isn't interesting

Sorry, I didn't notice it

yeah, of course I agree, that would be great, actually I tried that type of games before with some Arabic Learners and it was full of fun and profits , for both of us

so,I'll start

ها انا انادى ,فهل من مجيب؟؟

[Sos_chan]

The Firefighters will be dispatched soon to put out the buildings' fire.

سيصل رجال الإطفاء لإطفاء الحريق في المبنى قريباً
or
سينجز رجال الإطفاء إنهاء الحريق في المبنى قريبًا...

let's see, ummmm
The darker chocolate the better
xD

girls adore chocolate as everyone knows

it's soooo easy
c ya

[فاطمة الزهراء]

Yeah, this makes sense ,actually when I think more about them , I find both of them right, so I really don't know what is it supposed to mean

Thanks bro for answering my Q

سيصل رجال الاطفاء قريباً لاخماد الحريق بالمبنى

Very good

ولكن ليس المبنى إنما المباني فقد وضعتُ ' بعد إس الجمع

Sorry, I didn't notice it

yeah, of course I agree, that would be great, actually I tried that type of games before with some Arabic Learners and it was full of fun and profits , for both of us

No problem.

Aha that is really beneficial

Glad you like it, thanks

so,I'll start

ها انا انادى ,فهل من مجيب؟؟

OK

Here I call out, is there any response?

Is it correct?

mine:

صف لي شعوركَ وأنتَ تتكبد عناء كتابة موضوع طويل هادف وفي نهاية المطاف يذهب مهب الرياح.

Good luck

وفي أمان الله ورعايته

[Sos_chan]

ها انا انادى ,فهل من مجيب؟؟

Here am calling, will any one answer

I hope it's correct

سأهزم الصعاب وأنتصر


good luck mina

[Sos_chan]

MSOMS is killing me with this speed
I think we're all answering at the same time
!!!

lol

[فاطمة الزهراء]

سيصل رجال الإطفاء لإطفاء الحريق في المبنى قريباً
or
سينجز رجال الإطفاء إنهاء الحريق في المبنى قريبًا...

I think the first one is correct

But to avoid the repitition of
إطفاء

You can use
إخماد

وأيضًا المباني كما ذكرتُ سابقًا

let's see, ummmm
The darker chocolate the better
xD

girls adore chocolate as everyone knows

it's soooo easy
c ya

LOL, yes

ok here the translation:

أفضل ما بالشوكولاتة سوادها.

سأهزم الصعاب وأنتصر

I will cope with difficulties and then I'll become the victurous.

or

To be victurous, I will deal with all difficulties.

في أمان الله

[فاطمة الزهراء]

MSOMS is killing me with this speed
I think we're all answering at the same time
!!!

lol

Lol this proves how enthusiastic we are

Waiting for your corrections

[Sos_chan]

أفضل ما بالشوكولاتة سوادها.

Correct, but the better expression is
كلما كانت الشوكولا أغمق، كلما كانت أفضل.
الشوكولا الغامقة -أو السوداء- هي الأفضل ^_ ^

yeah indeed we're enthusiastic with this great game

the other is 100% correct
"I will cope with difficulties and then I'll become the victorious"
you can also say

I will cope with difficulties and be the victorious

[فاطمة الزهراء]

Correct, but the better expression is
كلما كانت الشوكولا أغمق، كلما كانت أفضل.
الشوكولا الغامقة -أو السوداء- هي الأفضل ^_ ^

yeah indeed we're enthusiastic with this great game

Since we are here to learn and benefit from each other, I have a notice:

كلما... كلما هذا خطأ شائع لا يجوز تكرارهما في نفس الجملة

والصواب قول:

كلما كانت الشوكولاتة أغمق كانت أفضل.

Yes yours is good ^^

OK, try this one:

صف لي شعوركَ وأنتَ تتكبد عناء كتابة موضوع طويل هادف وفي نهاية المطاف يذهب أدراج الرياح.

Good luck

وفي أمان الله

[Sos_chan]

Thanks a lot sweety Fatoom for your great advice
we aim to learn after all

let me try this

صف لي شعوركَ وأنتَ تتكبد عناء كتابة موضوع طويل هادف وفي نهاية المطاف يذهب أدراج الرياح.

tell me how you feel when you tolerate writing a good purposive topic, and it went with the wind eventually

I hope it's correct

try this one
علمتني الحياة أن أصعب أنواع البكاء، هي أن تضحك والدمع يملأ قلبك

Oops.. I hope things will work out
good luck

[فاطمة الزهراء]

Thanks a lot sweety Fatoom for your great advice
we aim to learn after all

let me try this


tell me how you feel when you tolerate writing a good purposive topic, and it went with the wind eventually

You're welcome dear

For the first part of sentence is good

the second one needs to edit it

For the expression
يذهب أدراج الرياح

We don't translate it word-for-word, its equivalent is:

be in vain

So your translation will be:

Tell me how you feel when you tolerate writing a good purposive topic, and at the end it will be in vain.

try this one
علمتني الحياة أن أصعب أنواع البكاء، هي أن تضحك والدمع يملأ قلبك

let's try

To laugh and tears cover your heart, it's the thougher type of crying that I learned in my life.

Hmm, I feel it is not correct, but I wait your correction

Mine:

لا يخرج هذا الأمر عن كونه تصرفًا صبيانيًا.

Good luck

وفي حفظ الرحمن

[Sos_chan]

To laugh and tears cover your heart, it's the thougher type of crying that I learned in my life

life taught me that the toughest type of crying, is to smile while tears fill your heart ;)

<< this is my try as well, so if any one has better suggestions, please do

لا يخرج هذا الأمر عن كونه تصرفًا صبيانيًا

It's just a childish act.

That's all for today, can anyone else put new sentence
I'll wait for your correction, Peace

[فاطمة الزهراء]

It's just a childish act.

Yes, but..

Act refers to what we do

I think, it's better to say behaviour

That's all for today, can anyone else put new sentence
I'll wait for your correction, Peace

OK

قضية الجرائم المتسلسلة التي حدثت مؤخرًا تثير الريبة حقًا.

>> دخلنا لعالم الجرائم، اتصلوا بكونان :P

بالتوفيق إن شاء الله

وفي حفظ الله ورعايته

[Harry Potter]

قضية الجرائم المتسلسلة التي حدثت مؤخرًا تثير الريبة حقًا.

Well...I'll try

The Serial Killing Case That Took Place Recently Is really Raising Suspicion

I hope it's right



Now my turn

لماذا يسود العنف و الكراهيه فى هذا العالم؟؟

[لحن العذاب]

لماذا يسود العنف و الكراهيه فى هذا العالم؟؟

Why there is violence and hatred in this world??

hop good

my turn


أمرت يجب أن اعيش ولكن من دونك

goog luck

[فاطمة الزهراء]

Peace be upon you

Well...I'll try



The Serial Killing Case That Took Place Recently Is really Raising Suspicion


I hope it's right

Good

Now my turn


لماذا يسود العنف و الكراهيه فى هذا العالم؟؟

I wonder why violence and hatred spread over this world?i

Is it correct?i

أمرت يجب أن اعيش ولكن من دونك

I think you mean

أمرتُ أن أعيش ولكن من دونك

OK, I think we can translate it like this:

I was obliged to live without you.

I hope it's correct

OK, try this:

لقد أعجبتُ بتلك اللوحة الفنية أيما إعجاب.

بالتوفيق إن شاء الله

وفي حفظ الله ورعايته

[لحن العذاب]

welcome fatma your name mean so much to me

أمرت يجب أن اعيش ولكن من دونك

I was obliged to live without you.

yup but that one i mean

i was ordered that i have to live but without you<<<

لقد أعجبتُ بتلك اللوحة الفنية أيما إعجاب.

I was impressed by that painting very impressive

hop good

my turn

لاتسأل, الان وجدت كل الاجوبه

[فاطمة الزهراء]

welcome fatma your name mean so much to me

Welcome sis La7n, and thanks dear for welcoming me ^^

yup but that one i mean

i was ordered that i have to live but without you<<<

Hmm, I want to tell you something

Of course you notice that I don't translate the sentences as they are in the source language

Because I depend in the first place on the meaning

So I hope what I do isn't wrong, as I knew the task of translator is passing the meaning to readers' mind.

OH, I talked too much, I'm sorry ^^"

Thanks for your correction

I was impressed by that painting very impressive

You can say:

I was greatly impressed by that painting.i

my turn

لاتسأل, الان وجدت كل الاجوبه

Don't ask, I have just found all the answers.

Mine:

غط أحمد في سبات عميق منذ ليلة أمس.

بالتوفيق إن شاء الله

وفي أمان الله ورعايته